UPSC MainsENGLISH-COMPULSORY20161 Marks10 Words
Q19.

If we had had money we would go shopping.

How to Approach

This question tests basic English grammar, specifically the understanding of conditional sentences. The task requires correcting the given sentence to standard English. The approach involves identifying the type of conditional sentence, recognizing the error in tense usage, and providing the grammatically correct alternative. The answer should be concise and accurate, demonstrating a grasp of English language rules.

Model Answer

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Introduction

Conditional sentences express that one event happens only if another event occurs. They are fundamental to expressing hypothetical situations and their consequences. The given sentence, "If we had had money we would go shopping," presents a third conditional sentence, which describes an unreal past condition and its unreal past result. However, the sentence contains a subtle grammatical error related to the correct tense sequence within this conditional structure. Correcting this requires a precise understanding of conditional sentence formation.

The correct sentence is: If we had money, we would go shopping.

Explanation of the Error and Correction

The original sentence, "If we had had money we would go shopping," incorrectly uses the past perfect tense ("had had") in the 'if' clause of a second conditional sentence. The second conditional describes unreal or hypothetical situations in the present or future. It follows the structure: If + past simple, would + base form of the verb.

Conditional Sentence Types

  • Zero Conditional: If + present simple, present simple (General truths) - If you heat water to 100 degrees Celsius, it boils.
  • First Conditional: If + present simple, will + base form of the verb (Possible future events) - If it rains, I will stay home.
  • Second Conditional: If + past simple, would + base form of the verb (Hypothetical or unlikely situations) - If I won the lottery, I would travel the world.
  • Third Conditional: If + past perfect, would have + past participle (Unreal past situations) - If I had studied harder, I would have passed the exam.

The original sentence mistakenly applied the third conditional structure to a situation that requires the second conditional. The intention is to express a present hypothetical situation – if we *currently* had money, we *would* go shopping. Therefore, the past simple ("had") is the correct tense to use in the 'if' clause.

Illustrative Examples

  • Incorrect: If I had known, I would tell him.
  • Correct: If I knew, I would tell him.
  • Incorrect: If she had studied, she would have passed. (This is a third conditional, implying she didn't study and didn't pass)
  • Correct: If she studied, she would pass. (This is a second conditional, implying she isn't studying and might not pass)

The corrected sentence accurately reflects the intended meaning of a hypothetical situation and its likely outcome.

Conclusion

In conclusion, the original sentence contained a grammatical error stemming from the incorrect application of conditional sentence structures. The correction, "If we had money, we would go shopping," utilizes the correct past simple tense in the 'if' clause, aligning with the second conditional and accurately conveying a present hypothetical scenario. A strong grasp of conditional sentences is crucial for clear and effective communication in English.

Answer Length

This is a comprehensive model answer for learning purposes and may exceed the word limit. In the exam, always adhere to the prescribed word count.

Additional Resources

Key Definitions

Past Simple
The past simple tense is used to describe completed actions in the past. It is formed by adding '-ed' to regular verbs or using irregular past forms.

Key Statistics

Approximately 1.5 billion people worldwide speak English as a first or second language (British Council, 2023).

Source: British Council (2023)

Studies show that errors in grammar, including conditional sentences, can negatively impact perceptions of credibility and competence in professional settings (Grammarly, 2022).

Source: Grammarly (2022)

Examples

Business Negotiation

In a business negotiation, a conditional sentence like "If you agree to our terms, we will finalize the deal" is commonly used to express conditions for agreement.

Frequently Asked Questions

What is the difference between 'would' and 'will' in conditional sentences?

'Will' is used in first conditional sentences to express likely future outcomes. 'Would' is used in second and third conditional sentences to express hypothetical or unreal outcomes.

Topics Covered

Language SkillsGeneral StudiesGrammarConditional SentencesTense